UX Critique, Redesign & Usability Testing Plan — Desktop & Mobile
Client
FutureFunds (hypothetical client) — financial planning for young professionals
Project type
Landing page UX audit, redesign, and usability testing plan
Role
UX/UI designer
Scope
Desktop + mobile landing page, including an interactive financial calculator and appointment scheduler
Timeline
3 weeks
Tools
Figma (design), PowerPoint (presentation deck)
Context
School project, framed as a developmental critique of a junior designer’s first-draft wireframes
Redesigned desktop landing page — hero, services, and the interactive calculator
Overview
FutureFunds is a hypothetical financial-planning client built for a clear audience: young professionals just starting to earn real money, who need help with debt repayment, investing, and retirement planning. The brief was framed as a developmental exercise — an intern’s first pass at the landing page had run into real usability problems, and the job was to diagnose exactly what was going wrong, then deliver a corrected, production-ready version for desktop and mobile, complete with a working financial calculator and appointment scheduler. The full project, from critique through a usability testing plan, took three weeks in Figma.
The Starting Point — A UX Critique
Before redesigning anything, the first step was a structured heuristic critique of the original wireframes — naming exactly what was breaking down and why, across six categories grouped into two sets of three.
The original wireframes under review
User-centricity, consistency & hierarchy
User-centricity — the designs didn’t address the target audience’s needs or anticipate real user behavior, creating friction from the first screen
Consistency — mismatched components, scattered type sizes, and unpredictable UI patterns broke the visual flow
Hierarchy — the appointment scheduler sat at the very top of the page, before visitors even knew what the company offered
Context, efficiency & cognitive load
Context — no cross-device responsiveness, which made the site effectively unusable on mobile
Efficiency — unlabeled buttons, ambiguous arrow icons, and roundabout navigation slowed every task down
Cognitive load — an overloaded consultation form demanded heavy personal information upfront, adding unnecessary stress
The Redesign — Desktop
The rebuilt desktop layout reorders the page around how a first-time visitor actually thinks: understand what the company does, see the services, try the interactive tool, then trust it enough to book a consultation. That new order — Hero → Services → Interactive Financial Visualizer/Calculator → Testimonials → Blog → Scheduler — answers the hierarchy problem from the critique directly.
Desktop — testimonials, blog, and the consultation scheduler
Key branding & UI enhancements
Applied the official brand palette: #23C686 green for primary elements and actions, #333333 charcoal for layout structure and text
A clean, modern value statement placed directly in the hero instead of buried further down the page
Scheduler moved to the end of the page, so visitors are asked to book only after they understand and trust the service
The Redesign — Mobile
The mobile version isn’t a shrunken desktop page — it’s rebuilt around what a phone actually needs: one column, thumb-sized targets, and a hidden secondary navigation. That directly answers the original context problem, a site that broke entirely on small screens.
Mobile — hero and servicesMobile — calculator, testimonials, and scheduler
Key enhancements
Multi-column layouts condensed into a single, unified vertical stack
A hamburger navigation toggle hides secondary links and frees up small-screen space
High-contrast #23C686 green primary actions, sized for thumb interaction
Proportionately scaled typography that keeps strong readability against a clean backdrop
Cross-Device UX Standards
Designing the same page twice — once for a mouse, once for a thumb — meant being explicit about how the two contexts actually differ, rather than just scaling one layout down for the other.
Screen real estate
Desktop: ample space for side-by-side, multi-column sections Mobile: focused, stacked single-column streams that minimize horizontal scrolling
Interaction model
Desktop: precise hover animations and small cursor targets Mobile: large, finger-friendly touch targets that prevent misclicks
Context of use
Desktop: stationary browsing, long-form reading, and heavier interaction Mobile: fast, on-the-go browsing that needs immediate scannability and minimal input friction
Accessibility Standards Checklist
Accessibility was treated as a checklist to build against, not an afterthought to test for once the design looked finished.
Checklist
Buttons & links — descriptive text labels replace blank or icon-only buttons
Typography — a clear semantic scale (H1, H2, H3) for screen-reader parsing, with body copy at 16pt or larger
Color & contrast — #333333 charcoal on light backgrounds tested against WCAG AA; color is never the only signal of a system state
Forms — persistent input labels replace temporary placeholder text, so fields stay clear after a user starts typing
Why Figma
Figma was the right tool for this stage for three reasons: it supports high-fidelity realism for testing exactly how a branded component like the green primary CTA should behave; its component and instance system keeps elements identical across the desktop and mobile canvases without rebuilding them by hand; and its live, shared workspace makes it easy to pass critique back and forth between a senior reviewer and a junior designer.
Usability Testing Plan
The redesign wasn’t the end of the process — it shipped with a full plan for testing it against real users before calling it finished.
Scope & goals
Testing scope: header navigation, landing page readability, ease of using the financial visualizer, and appointment form submission speed
Participants: 5–9 targeted users aged 25–35, matching the core young-professional persona
Staff & tools: one primary moderator, using remote testing software with video and screen capture
Primary goals: quantify time-on-task, measure completion rates for key paths, and establish user trust ratings
Script outline
Phase 1 — Welcome & setup: frame the session as testing the layout, not the participant, and ask them to think out loud
Phase 2 — Task-based prompts: e.g. “Walk me through how you’d locate and use the financial visualizer to test different savings rates”
Phase 3 — Debrief: e.g. “What was the easiest part of this layout? Did you feel comfortable sharing information on this page?”
Bias mitigation
Iterative optimization — feedback loops turn raw usability metrics directly into structured layout updates
Analysis bias — behavior is scored against standardized rubrics and cross-checked with recorded screen sessions
Response bias — neutral, open-ended prompts (“walk me through your experience with that tool”) instead of leading ones (“was that green button easy to see?”)
Next Steps
Immediate action items
Deploy the finalized usability test using the high-fidelity, branded Figma mockups
Sort participant feedback systematically and adjust layout decisions to match
A user-centered mindset going forward
Run user interview research before drafting early layout structures
Build in user-testing touchpoints at every project milestone
Run ongoing compliance checks against the brand guide and the accessibility checklist
Reflection
What set this project apart from a typical redesign was starting with a formal critique instead of jumping straight to visuals. Naming exactly which heuristics were failing — hierarchy, cognitive load, consistency — before touching Figma made every later decision traceable back to a specific problem, rather than a vague sense that the original “looked bad.” Writing the usability testing plan alongside the redesign also kept the project honest: the work isn’t done because it looks polished, it’s done once it’s been tested against the users it was built for.